Well, my computer broke...feh. So, for at least the next week it's away for repairs, and I'm only able to access the internet because I can use my father's laptop. I lost everything I'd typed up, so far, though fortunately I have the hard copies of everything. And since I posted everything I'd typed here it's all saved, and I just need to recopy it and fix a bit of formatting. Anyway, I'll be posting the first bits of the chapter 1 redo soon, so look forward to it!